🇺🇸 Uly 🐝added a comment 5 years ago
Not to be offensive, but this seems like it was written by Soviets rather than English-speaking natives.
But the Colorado is still a river of enormous fury - wild, restless and angry. It is cutting deeply into the desert rock, forming the Grand Conyon, which strikes one's imagination as a fabulous phenomenon of nature. Its perpendicular walls go up to the hight of over 1,500 metres above river level.
But the Colorado is still a river of enormous fury - wild, restless and angry. It CUTS DEEP into the desert rock, forming the Grand CANYON, which IS STRIKING as a fabulous phenomenon of nature. Its perpendicular walls go up to A HEIGHT of over 1,500 metres above river level.
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Not to be offensive, but this seems like it was written by Soviets rather than English-speaking natives.