So, now i want to tell you a few words about my personal strengths.I want to start by saying that I consider that I’m very open in communication and a self-confident person. I can very quickly get used to a new life and this quality will help me on the exchange program. I'm used to always treat everything with a good mood. In any situation, I will go to the end, no matter what it costs me. Even if I can’t do something, I don’t get upset and try again, because we learn from our mistakes. Also, I think that I am very independent and self-sufficient. When I was 11 years old, I went alone to the summer camp, which was abroad – in Crimea. I spent a month there without my friends and parents. And when I got there, I wasn’t worried about anything, because I knew that I would quickly find new friends. So it was, already on the first day in the camp, I was in the centre of attention. Everyone wanted to know about my country and about me. My parents weren’t there and I had to do everything myself. I got a lot of new experience in this camp. And this experience will help me quickly get used to a new life in the USA and also make friends with my host family. Thanks to this experience, I learned to make decisions quickly and correctly. My feelings towards life have changed, and I started just living. Yes – just living! I stopped being afraid to make mistakes and learned to take risks. After all, if you really want something very much, you need to do everything for this and then you will definitely achieve it! Take the risks and live beautifully – it’s my motto!
Thanks to this experience, I’VE learned to make decisions quickly and WISELY. My OUTLOOK ON life haS changed, and I’VE started just living. Yes – just living! I stopped being afraid to make mistakes and learned to take risks. After all, if you really want something _ _, you need to do everything YOU CAN and _ you will definitely achieve it! Take _ risks and live beautifully – THAT’s my motto!
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And when I got there, I wasn’t worried about anything [no comma] because I knew that I would quickly MAKE new friends. AND THAT’S EXACTLY WHAT HAPPENED, already on the first day OF _ camp, I was _ the centre of attention. Everyone wanted to know about my country and about me. My parents weren’t there and I had to do everything myself. I HAD a lot of new experienceS AT this camp, AND THESE experienceS will help me quickly ADAPT to a new life in the US_ and also make friends with my host family.
_ _ I’D LIKE to tell you a few words about my personal strengths. I’D LIKE to start by saying that I consider MYSELF A very open _ _ and a self-confident person. I can very quickly ADAPT to a new life and this quality will help me IN the exchange program. I TEND TO APPROACH EVERYTHING WITH A POSITIVE ATTITUDE. In any situation, I will SEE THINGS THROUGH to the end AT ALL COSTS. Even WHEN I can’t do something, I NEVER get upset, BUT try again [no comma] because we learn from our mistakes. Also, I think MYSELF very independent and self-sufficient. When I was 11 years old, I went ABROAD to _ summer camp in THE Crimea. I spent a month there without my friends and parents.
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Thanks you very much❤️❤️ вы меня правда выручили, это эссе очень важно для меня, ещё раз спасибо😍😍
c большим удовольствием!
Извините за вопрос, но что значит
_ _
Там не нужны слова? Например
A very open _ _ and
это означает, что я там удалил слово/а