I'll be so grateful for all of your corrections and suggestions. Help me, please, make this translation smoother and more idiomatic.
I heard this curious story from some of my acquaintances. A pretty girl was waiting for her early bus at the bus stop. It should be noted that she wore an exquisite white trouser suit. One guy was passing by the bus stop at high speed on his car. Accidentally at that moment he splashed dirty water from a puddle onto her clothes. He didn`t want that, of course. Unfortunately, her outfit was totally ruined. With upset feelings she started yelling at him using even the obscene words. He got out of his car and apologized to the girl. After that, because he wanted to make amends, he invited her to a restaurant. Also, he offered to pay for her almost new suit. Despite the fact that the girl was still angry, she accepted his invitation. So their acquaintance occurred. The most interesting thing in this story is that they got married after some time.
for *her early bus -- the
*on his car -- in
Accidentally *(at that moment) - skip or explain what the moment was.
e.g. as he was driving by
He didn`t *want that - intend
*With upset feelings - Upset
So their acquaintance occurred - try something else
thing *(in this story) is that - skip, the thing is that.., or part of the story.
The thing is - stable expression, better
Влад, огромное спасибо вам за внимание к моему посту и за исправления!
I heard this curious story from some of my acquaintances. EARLY ONE MORNING, a pretty girl was waiting for her _ bus at the bus stop. It should be noted that she WAS WEARING an exquisite white trouser suit. THIS guy was DRIVING PAST the bus stop REALLY FAST AND accidentally _ splashed HER WITH dirty water from a puddle _. NOT ON PURPOSE, of course. Unfortunately, her outfit was totally ruined. SHE GOT UPSET AND started yelling at him – EVEN USING _ obscene words. He got out of his car and apologized to the girl. After that, because he wanted to make amends, he invited her to EAT SOMEWHERE. HE ALSO offered to pay for her almost new suit. Despite the fact that the girl was still angry, she accepted his invitation AND THAT'S HOW THEY MET. The most interesting PART OF this story is that they got married after some time.
Ули, огромное спасибо тебе за внимание к моему посту и за исправления!
да не за что
May God keep you! Какой скромный :)
You too))