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⁌ ULY ⁍solicitó una traducción 5 anos atrás
¿Cómo traducir? (ru-en)

Медленно приподнял голову и уставился сквозь решетку на своего убийцу. Теперь тот целился ему в голову.

El comentario del autor

The challenge here is separating the first HE from the killer HE.

Traducciones de usuarios (2)

  1. 1.

    He slowly looked up and saw the gun now pointing to his head through the grate. He stared at his killer.

    Traducción agregada por Nick Uzhov
    Bronce ru-en
    4
  2. 2.

    He slowly raised his head and, through the bars, looked at his killer, who was aiming at his head.

    Traducción agregada por Tatiana Gerasimenko
    Oro ru-en
    3

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⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

I know, but how are you going to show this in your translation? 😉

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

This is a translation exercise. I’ve already posted two more and Nick took part.

Mikhail Petrovpublicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

He slowly raised his head and stared through the bars at his killer. Now, the killer was aiming at his head.

Anna Annapublicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

the latter was aiming...

Tatiana Gerasimenkopublicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

He slowly raised his head and, through the bars, looked at his killer who was aiming at his head.

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

Very good!! Just one little but very important detail that makes this clear who you’re talking about - a comma after killer.

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

@Mikhail: that works too, but that’s the long way))) Add it!

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

@Anna: That’s one solution 👍🏼

Nick Uzhovpublicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

If I take a bit extra freedom...
He slowly looked up and saw the gun now pointing to his head through the grate. He stared at his killer.

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

*If you’ll allow me some poetic license...

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

Very good, Nick - you reworked the whole thing and kept the meaning intact, even adding a bit of drama at the end 😉

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

Add it!

Nick Uzhovpublicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

thank you )))

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

👍🏼

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

@Tatiana: Add yours - with the comma, it’s perfect 🤩

⁌ ULY ⁍publicó un comentario 5 anos atrás

@Mikhail: Add yours too.

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